day two-done

yesterday I wrote while waiting to get in to see the Doctor--good thing they were busy! I needed the whole 45 minutes to come up with an idea and let it sprout...later, the poem solidified and then needed some editing to make it what it became.  I don't typically like to edit poems too much. They seem so short and timely, like a snap shot...maybe this is only my view though...what do you think?